by Colleen Thomas
This was FUNNY! Especially the lyrics at the end. 5* because of the content & story line. I don't normally read lesbian stories but this one was DIFFERENT & ENTERTAINING!! Well Done!
I can't believe I missed this, still laughing and still turned on :)
As usual, I was reading with dick in hand and couldn't let go when I started laughing.
And laughing.
And laughing.
I think I need a Band-Aid or something.
Did I, by any chance, catch your act at the Comedy Castle? You have a real gift for humor.
xD Oh my gawd!! I laughed so hard while reading this. Your dream comes true but turns into a nightmare of sorts. Poor little elf :D And that's a lot medical expenses.
my blast from the past pick on the New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout.
Bwha ha ha ha. Although I must admit when lost my ass (laughed it off) it kinda hurt.
LMAO This was so funny! I'm still grinning.
Please continue, I'd love to read more on elf feminism. LOL
Not going to wish you good luck, because luck has nothing to do with this. You've got a lot of talent and a wicked sense of humor.
Black Tulip
and worth reading over and over. Gave me the giggles.
You are simply fabulous, Colleen. I laughed throughout the entire story.
Happy Holidays!
grllvr
I loved that,really! from the deductible on the dental plan to the squeezing grape to the 12 days of Christmas...just wonderful!
Colly, you've said some nice things about my work, but I can NOT write funny. Light, yes, but not funny. This was hilarious. I was almost in pain with laughing. We all harbour secret thoughts of winning but I surrender now. I have no chance against this. Tremendous piece of work. I salute you!
Alex
Your story was hysterical. I had to read and reread it a couple of times as I was laughing so hard. That is definitely a very humorous way of looking at Santa and his elves, and Christmas in general. Awesome job!
Colly, I made the mistake of drinking water while reading your story, and I almost drowned! Very funny stuff.
Had to read it twice to make sure I caught all the jokes.
Very very funny Colleen!
That was a funny ass story. Well written and a pleasure to find in all the entries. Hope to see you on the winners block ( right below me. lol)
K.R.
This story / novella had me laughing from almost the first paragraph. It helped the contents to seem longer, as I had to stop reading regularly to control my mirth. Very Well Done !!!
Thank you, I laughed my head off, just what doctor ordered. Maybe you should consider putting a warning sign. No eating or drinking while reading.. choking hazard. Thx again, it was funny. :D
but I told you that when I first read this. I do so hope you continue to write in this genre.
*still giggling*
v~
Considering the shitty day i had,Dealing with miserable,maint. supervisor(whos crew sucks ass ...out twelve guys.....at least five are really worth the money they make...lmao),tooooo the point.....just the right laughs in just the right places timing wise,combined with an awesome dinner at red lobster......EXCELLENT...
WHERE THE HELL DID THAT COME FROM?? AWESOME, STILL WIPING THE TEARS FROM MY EYES! MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!
As one who loves writing humor I must say you have what it takes. Santa and his elves will never be the same again. Good luck!
Cookie :)
... that you kick ass in this category, TOO. Happy holidays and good luck in the contest!
What a hilarous story. I laughed so hard I got stitches in my sides. Thanks and Mary Christmas to you.
I NEEDED A LAUGH TODAY AND THIS STORY WAS PERFECT. THANKS FOR WRITING IT. I'M SURE IT WILL PROVIDE OTHERS WITH A WELL DESERVED LAUGH. NICE CHANGE FROM THE ORDINARY.
nice to have a change from some of these ultra sweet, saccharine stories, including mine!
I started laughing so hard I could only read a few words at a time. Then I had to wait for my eyes to clear enough to read a few more. :)
especially in light of all the downers I have been reading this winter. I haven't finished my Winter Contest entry yet and I hope you don't think I am copying you but mine has some things in common with yours.
You have a real flair for comedy, Ms C. Keep up the good work.
Rumple
You had me laughing my arse off. A very welcome surprise! Best of luck in the contest, hon!
I laughed, I peed my pants and then I laughed some more...and somehow I was also turned on.
This was a very well done piece of humor.
I bow to you.
Abs.
Delightfully funny take on Christmas shenanegans. Very well done, Colly. Laugh out loud funny!!!
totally entertaining! i was laughing out really loud! thanx a million...keep up the great work!
I loved it and was giggling all the way through. Excellent job, Colly!!
every time I read it. Yet another string to your bow. Write more like this, funny and sexy......loved it.
"I'm seeing Aztec temples and shit." I still laugh every time I think about this line!! This was fantastic! You have a terrific talent for humor writing. I want to use this PC to officially encourage you to keep it up! :)
More! More! Colly, this is so damn funny! Your sense of humor just shines. I think you may have found another great genre to write for. Keep going.
I am glad that I was not trying to drink anything while I read this....tehehe
Always, Lizzy
funny as hell and well worth the time to read. Ho ho ho is about right. Great job and good luck with the contest.
GREAT story collie.. had me laughing.. which isn't easy. Good luck... although with talent like yours.. you really don'tneed luck!