All Comments on 'Twenty Years Later'

by footshrimper

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Pretty good!!!

Story needs to be longer especally the creampie part,story is almost a copy of experements between me & my wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
great submission

I loved it. I do agree it needed to be longer though.

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