All Comments on 'Twins'

have me confused with someone else

Very good, I enjoyed it quite a bit.

You? Why are you telling this to me as if I was there? I wasn't.

Therefore, the tense you used is bad. It's not a good tense to use. The illiterate zombies might enjoy it but I couldn't finish his. No vote from me. Rewrite in first or third person and I'll get back to it.

I hate stories like this I wasn't there so don't write me in your story. As a female I hate it & do not want to be the female or any character in your story. So I can't see a male reader wanting to be your female character either. Its annoying 1*.

The description CLEARLY says "You're a girl and you get picked up by twins at a bar." So if you had paid attention you would know that it would be written as if you (the reader) are the main character. So shut the fuck up. K? Thanks.

GREAT story btw, I enjoyed it. :)

Nicely done.

If you don't like second person writing, fuck off and don't read the story.

This was beautiful. I am so wet right now, and I'm in public. Thanks a lot, haha.

this is without a doubt the hottest and best erotica I have ever read. This got me soaking. Loved it.

One of my absolute fave stories on here and I need more of this! Great writing, keep it up. xx

This is one of the hottest stories ever. Please, please, please write more. For the love of everything holy - please give us more!!!!! Purely amazing.

Probably my favorite read. Super super hotttt

I absolutely loved this...still wishing for a page 3...lol

I read a lot of litarotica stories but this is by far the best I've ever come across.

I've been reading stories on this site for awhile now. This is the best story I've read.

Hey love how you made the girl feel so turned on by how the brothers interact with each other with a twincest interaction.

PLEASE PLASE PLASE write another chapter!

Include some foot fetish content. foot to foot sole to sole rubbing :D

Interesting perspective. I was really in there.

I'd ever have the desire to be with two identical hot twins.. But now i want that! Nice story! Thanks!