by gymmyt
i absolutely love your twins stories like u cant believe so detailed and such a great story behind it max is my boy lol love the stories again im glad i think i was the first to read this one!!!!
Please don't stop there write more I want to see where this ends
great writing. The story pulls your interest into it. Was happy to see that you are continuing to write more. Chapter 3 was the best by far. You seem to be really getting into the head of your charactures in the story. I'll be waiting to see more from you. Thanks. Tom
you went overboard with this chapter. good way to ruin a relationship between the twins.
Last poster: ruined? Get real. 18-22 year old horny *kids*. Theyre going to want to fuck everything good looking in site. If you want a perfect(ly boring) little incest marriage there are plenty on here, nothing wrong with someone writing something different for a change! Its mostly all fiction/fantasy anyways. Hell I don't even like orgy stories, much less incest stories with more than one guy in it, but this was well written and enjoyable! (And my happiness intact since the sister didnt fuck any of the guys... Yeah, sexist one-sided of me, but oh well;). Loved it!
you writers seem to forget that when it comes to incest it is always the fewer the better. adding outsiders increases the chance someone will blab or blackmail them then all hell will break loose. thanks for another ruined story.
you just proved he doesn't love his sister or any other girl just himself. thanks for ruining another story, you would have been smart to stop after chapter one but even that sucked.