All Comments on 'Two At A Time'

Why do you write using incomplete sentences? Very annoying. Totally upsetting. Have to finish sentences for you. No complete thoughts. Lacking subjects. Disconnected. Not cool. Not clever. Get it?

like a dream. The way you write is very telling. If I knew that litle minx however, I would have her shower before getting the funk on with her, if you know what I mean- that fellow at the club seemed a bit too easy as the dirty folk go.

but thanks, I enjoyed the read

I find your staccato style very powerful. You write the way you think, and it works. Maybe English teachers want full sentences all the time, grammatical centerpieces for their ordinary tables. Language is art. You use it well.

I agree with Mr Jones...your writing style is powerful! Every word pulls me in and makes me hot... Sexy story once again from you ;) I hope you find the inspiration to write again soon...