All Comments on 'Two-Family House: Girls Gone Wild'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Incredible Story

You have begun, a great storyline. I will continue to wait and watch for further installments. Keep up the excellent work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great

Good...

add more dialogue maybe:P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Such potential

This could be a hot story but it sounds too much like Meet Jane. Meet Dick. Dick meet Jane. Do you get my drift? It needs to flow better, I couldn't even finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WoW

oh my god, my pussy is sooo wet. I loved the story, pls write more.

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