All Comments on 'Two of a Kind Ch. 03'

The kitlings! I Love this story!

There's still at least one other chapter. I was afraid this was the end.

4 of my favorite stories all posted new chapters over the past days, so I'm content. I just knew Bashta and Cavel were going to bond in the temple. Beautiful.

Liked the description of their bond as well as the change that they underwent after their mating. It was interesting to read that they both took on more cat-like features and that their strength keeps them both encouraged.

Just saying. :) This is a really well-done and engrossing adventure story!

I love this story,just read all three chapters, and was captivated from the beginning. Excellent well written 5** all the way, good job.

First of all, awesome series. I've seen your name and stories on another site(which I often frequent) but never read your stuff until you came to Lit. All I can say is shame on me and welcome to this world....lol. I am now all caught up to the third story in the series and I'm thoroughly addicted. It's all so Hypnotic :o). You are truly talented and I wish you continued success!

This chapter definitely one of the best out of all your stories, in my opinion. I say that bc it was so rich in details and you drew pictures for the reader. Kudos for taking the time to develop the relationship between Cavel and Bashta. It lent support to the words of the temple jaguar about it being a deeper mating and to the strength of them as a pair. It really makes it seem like they are connected at the level of the soul rather than by sex. Just bc it's an erotic lit site doesn't mean the plot needs to start with a sexual connection. I think for the purpose of this couple it was important to build the strong foundation for them. That way they will be stronger together as they face the challenges ahead. I can't say enough about the temple scene. The whole way the mating was handled by this jaguar who created them was really beautiful. The fact that you made them moving back to civilization and their job to come back to the temple yearly work was great. You allowed Bashta to keep this important job he'd held by himself since his clan died. You also allowed him to grow closer to the other men slowly and it is so nice to see him really being absorbed into the clan. it was so imaginative overall. I like how you connect all the details and don't leave threads hanging or have things Like your other fans, I can't wait for more!

I love your writing style. Easy to become addicted to it and I can't wait for more. Great Job.

Thank you to everyone for the comments, feedback and votes. Nothing is quite as great as finding a new comment from a reader that is enjoying one of my stories. So again, thank you so much!

The next chapter has been submitted and I'm working editing the next chapter as well. So more to come soon!

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Yes, wonderful and exotic. You have a great talent in your descriptions and the images which you create in our minds. Looking forward to the following chapters with bated breath! Wonder what Cavel's hot breath feels like on Bashta's neck? Hmmmm!

See what you have conjured? LOL!

Again a beautiful story romantic and intriguing so you just want to go onto the next chapter