by Baldguy72
It was a good story, but belonged more in Erotic Couplings, not Romance. As far as a Romance story went, it felt sort of...empty. Like something was missing. The talent is there, really! You just have to breathe more life into the story, make the dialogue a little less stale, and just give it some more character. 7/10
Really good. Hope you follow up with part2 and fill in some of the blanks. Still married? etc.
It takes courage to submit something here and you're off to a really good start. Your story flows logically and keeps it simple. I'd like to see more detail in your future submissions. Keep at it.
I enjoyed what was a nice quick, but well-told tale. Don't let the moralizers get to you--I can't imagine why anyone hung up on such matters even bothers to frequent this site.
really romantic at all. Was she still married? If so, then she was just a cheating slut of a wife.