All Comments on 'Two Wrongs DO Make a Right'

Lovely story, loved the characters. You have the reader seem as if they were there. Great style, great combination of eroticism and romance.

It should get 5 stars. The story, the script, the romance and obviously the love was really wonderful. I liked the end very much. It was a great love story indeed. Please, keep up your great work.

Love this story!!! Great work on the characters, they feel so real and makes it a pleasure (in more ways9 to read this wonderful story.

This was such a good story! Great build up to the final moment, absolutely adore it!! 5 stars for sure!

One of the longest read and with a great storyline I've read on here. I've enjoyed every minute of reading it. Thank you

realistic, sensual, erotic and exciting. It has everything sexy that I like. Wonderful characters - I love these girls. Please keep up the good work !!

So she's finally shot of Jennifer!! Thank God!! Any chance of more about these two?

I like that there's a story line, I don't generally make it through the multiple part stories. I like the way you write. Any chance of further character development?

I personally thought all your filler was a lil boring and the plot flow and pacing could use some work. But your central story and the plot itself was really good. As well as the characters. All in all I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Thank you for the privilege of letting us read your tale. 5 stars. ...also the entire scene with kelly and the sisrers was haaaaaaaawt 8o ...and omg Ariel Q_Q that horrible woman fucking the woman she loved while she was in the next room hearing it. My eyes tend to water when a story gets emotional, but my god that had my tears flowing. Wat to tug muh heartstrings 8p

This is up on lush stories and it's in three parts, called Kelly's Awakening. Don't know if this is someone else or you, but I just thought you should know

Wonderfully written and very yummy too! Thank you!

TWENTY STARS xxxxxxxxx