by jennb
Dude! What a good story. Keep us up to date with your talent, man. I look forward to seeing more of the same, if not better! I know there's more inside waiting to come (no pun intended) out.
story follows a familar theme - stupidity; all those people in the house never heard anything - naturally, the niece becomes a "slut" - is there some template writers follow? no creativity what so ever
Nice story; good characters and action. Hope that you write more on them...
This is one of my favorite fantasies, I've always wanted to have a taboo relationship with my hot little niece