All Comments on 'Under Centaurian Protection Ch. 04'

Please finish Soren's story. It deserves completion.

I see you've not written in years. I wished for the story to continue :'(

I hope you continue there stories. Perhaps it's unlikely with so many years gone by but your work is good.

I love your stories, I hope you finish this one!

More please! You're such an amazing author, I love the emotion conveyed in your writing.

The originality of the plot is fascinating, and I for one am looking forward to seeing more of this storyline.

Much agreed with everyone else, you have a terrific plot going in these series, keep adding!

I just found these stories and read them all to this point.

I'm sorry this one was never finished and there aren't more of them.

I really want to know what happens... please write an ending! I really love all your centaur stories and the world you created. I hope you get inspiration to write more.

GREAT STORIES. I FELL IN LOVE WITH THE MAIN CHARACTERS. STRONG START BUT WE COULD TELL YOU GOT BORED OR JUST DISTRACTED. WHAT A SHAME. I WISH YOU CHAPTERS WERE ALSO LONGER, JUST MORE CONTENT. I AM SORRY YOU NEVER SAW FIT TO FINISH YOUR LAST CHAPTER, IT CAN BE HARD TO FORGET WHEN IT'S TIME TO VOTE. I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE CENTAURIAN STORIES IN THE FUTURE. HERE'S HOPING!

hi can you continue it pls? ive read it ages ago and im still waiting plz continue it im begging you

I just found all these great stories you wrote and you ended this one like this? you need to come back and finish Soren and Julia story. Also you should continue the other stories of Callum and Lila, and Thayer and Rose.

It is a shame this story wasn't finished, esp. when it was the third installment from this world and you were more invested as a result. I also wonder about the author saying she had other stories finished that continue after this story. I'd love to see them. This was a wonderful group of stories. I love the characters. But this is unfinished and that sucks. What will happen to Paul? How will it affect their relationship? What will Haley be told? Is Lila really okay? Probably won't see more of it but I still recommend the stories.

you have got to be kidding me.... that's where you left it.. damn...

You couldn't possibly be done. I greatly appreciate creative mythology and I have loved all of these stories. You've given the characters so much depth! Please finish this story.

I just discovered these stories yesterday and have been hooked! Your story telling is so amazing and well written. I've fallen so hard for these characters and your version of centaurs and lifestyle and traditions. I also love the variety of the characters and their situations. Had me biting my nails.

I really hope you pick this up again one day, I really hope Soren and Julia get a happy ending. Hell, it's so well written if you decided to sign with a publishing company I'd buy it with no hesitation. And looking at the other comments I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks this.

I really hope you come back to continue this wonderful erotic centaur world. But for now I'll just reread them.

Why did you leave Soren's story unfinished? The other stories were done well, but you have left so much hanging here? Did you just get tired of them? I guess since you've left them for so long, you are finished. It is just disappointing.

I loved each and every part of your stories as i read them. I hope to see more of stories of this series. It is filled with passion, love and sexy as hell.

I love, love, love all your Centaur stories. They are truly wonderful, as is your writing style. Thank you so much and hope to see more from you in the future.

i think paul killed, jilies husband bcz he wanted julie for him self

and i think now he is goign to confess that

anyways he is going to die

love it

will you please pick up the story again... a lot of your readers including me want to know what happens next.. pretty please don't leave us hanging :)

But I can't believe it ends this way .... oh please ! You've asked us if we wanted or minded more centaur stories - I guess everybody responded positively to you; so now you're leaving it this way ??

No faaaair !!!

It feels like you left this unfinished. Is there anymore to come?

I loved these stories. It literally made me cry when Lila almost died. She and Callum are my favorite. It would be wonderful if you decide to pick up these stories again and expand on them one day.

I guess this IS it then, as it's been 6 years without any updates/comments. R.I.P. for another brilliant story unfinished, just like so many others here on Lit. BLOODY SHAME! :(

Great story! Characters are well defined with attention to detail. Love the continuing story line. Keep it going please.

Was that the end of the story?

I do hope that you will continue to write more of these, I truly enjoy them. Just the right mix of romance and eroticism. I look forward to reading more.

THAT you find continue!!!! Love your stories pleas please please please and finally please write more!!!!

Enjoyable stories please finsh and make more please

These stories were great, I really wish that you'd have finished it...

I have really enjoyed the story in this series. I am looking forward to more!

I do hope you plan to finish this and continue the series. I really look forward to reading more.

Please, I need more of your exquisite romantic story. We all want to know what happens with Soren and Julia, Haley, Lila and Callum, Paul...

This was good. What happened to the rest of the story?

It is a shame you never finished this story. What happens to Paul and his men? What about the mating ceremony? Will Callian and his Lila have more kids? Will little Haley get a brother or sister? So many things left undone and here it is 2013 and still no answers!

I have read all of your centaurian stories and their chapters. They are all very well written and I look forward to reading more, very soon please!

keep writing these stories i love how you portray the centaurs and would like to see the next chapter to this story

more please!!!! love you work and really need to delve deeper

Could you possibly make a story about Haley and Rham when they are older? Whether or not they turn out to be just friends or they end up mated together. Id really like to know more about them they sound adorable.

Please continue the story with all the characters. I couldn't stop reading and I can't wait for more....

I have read all your stories and am waiting for the rest please keep writing

this is an excelent story please right more

If you read this please continue the story

PLEASE WRITE MORE!

VERY INTERESTING =D

LOVE IT =)

Are you seriously going to leave it there. You need to finish the story, it's to good not to finish it. More please more

I agree with everyone else please write more detail.

Wow just read all 3 stories in one sitting. I've never been into the nonhuman genre before but you have completely given me a new perspective on it. I don't expect you to see this comment, as your last update was years ago... But if ever the mood strikes, please finish this story! I love how intense and passionate the centaurs are. Plus you said you had ideas for 3 more installments, so you must have had a lot of interest in this series to begin with. It is a shame to see your interest gone :(

Tl;dr centaur sex is awesome.

Come back. I need more! this is my 5th time reading these stories.

Please come back and finish this story! Better yet, find a publishing company and turn these into full length novels with more details. I'm sad because I like the world you created, but you probably aren't getting these comments. =(

I have to agree please continue the stories.

Please continue with the story. So much is left unanswered.

I know it's been years, but I really think there's so much more you could do with them. What happens with Paul? What about Hayle? What happens when she grows up? I'd love to see more!

I would love to hear a story about Haley when shes all grown up. She sounds like a fiesty little girl and would make a wonderful story with her little admirer Rhamnes.

you just have to keep going with this. its to good to stop now!!!!!

I would love for you to write more. I love following their lives. Please do continue to write following there stories. These are very good. :-)

I love your Centurian stories and I hope you write more!!!

after reading your stories i would so enjoy reading more of your work...also these types of stories are new to me and i havent found many other writers that take them in the direction that you have

I have enjoyed these stories very much and would like to spend more time with the Centaurians. Thank you.

The series grabs my attention so fully, then it ends! Please don't let this be the end.

Will there ever be more to Sorens' story? And I would luv to see stories for sonja and haley.

Don't leave us hanging like this....!!!!! I would love to read more of your centaurian stories ^__^

Please tell me there is going to be more chapters have fallen in love with your centaur collection. It would be amazing if you were to get them published would buy them all.

Keep up the great work.

I absolutely love this story, I am so looking forward for more posts, please, please, please continue with it :)

please more of this story its quite gripping i love the way you write

Anyone know when and if the next chapter is coming??? This is one of the best stories I've read. Is Soren going to kill paul or listen to his mate? Will paul try to escape? Who will haley be mated too? Lots of questions that need answers.

Please continue this series. What happens with Haley and the colts in this village?

I'd like to know if there will ever be a continuance of this story? As a few others stated it was also my first foray into this genre and got me hooked. If you don't plan to continue it please let me know so i can stop waiting for it!!

Update! I am dying to know what happens.

This is one of the first series I read when I first started coming to the site. I stumbled upon it again, and love it as much now as I did then. Please finish it. Will Julia try to help Paul or allow the mating? How is Lila doing, and what is life like for Sonja? How does Haley adapt to her new life? There are so many questions that need answered. Please finish the story!

I have read it four times and i am still waiting for the rest, please send the next chapter and i want to know about Haley and who her mate will be, though i think i know who it might be, Please send the next chapter!!!!!!!!!

please you need to write more for this couple and maybe one for Haley too.

you HAVE to finish this sory!!!!! it would be criminal if you didn't! please hurry and write another chapter, or two!!

Do you even come on here any more? It's been two years! We'd all like to know what happens!

I read your entire Centaur series and I love it!! So hot!! And...I want to know the end to Soren's story! So many loose threads...please don't stop now.

Are you going to finish Soren's story? He needs to mate with Julia, kill Paul and the other criminals....plus have Julia have a colt and have Haley grow up. I could've sworn there was a story that was based on another Centaur with Sonja healing a Centaur from another tribe....but it's not listed on your story list. Did you post under another name?? Please let me know what it is, so I can further read the amazing Centaurian stories you have written!!!!

Thank you for creating such wonderful and exciting stories! What a pleasure to read!

Love love love these centaurs! Please write more !

i absolutely love your stories , and i am eagerly anticipating more .as a suggestion may be you could have a plain heroine in your next story :))

All 3 of your Centaurian stories have been fabulous to read!!!! Please keep more coming especially with so many Centaurs to write about!!!!!! Thank you!!

I love the stories I would like to read more!

Please you have to continue these stories!!! They are awesome! :)

I absolutely love your Centaurian stories!!! Keep them coming!!

So few people actually write about centaurs! We need more!

I love these stories! ohh please write more.

I voted 5 stars. Your imagination is wonderful, and I fell for the brothers. One problem that I can't get past though. That is, the location of the centaur's genitals. Maybe they transform into humanoids for loving, and equestrians when necessary? Who knows. But please, don't let that question stop you from writing about OUR centaurs. We love them, and I can't wait for Haley to grow up. Thanks for writing these stories.

I have really enjoyed reading your stories about the centaur's, however i have to protest about the way that you ended things. Whatever happened to Paul and his cronies. Did they mate succesfully. Excuse spelling btw. lol Your imagination is inspiring and that will be reflected in my vote. Thanx for entertaining me for a couple of nights :) Seriously though, please complete this story or it will drive me dull. ahhhhhh dont need that now do i. lol hope to see the next submission soon. Well done again :)

I hope you will write more Centaurian stories!!!! I love them!!

i Love your centaur stories! I really hope you write more of them!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Your centaur stories are amazing! I hope very much to see more of them and would hate to see them end here. I don't think I've ever read such an imaginative and well writen series of short stories that did not stick with what you typically see in a fantasy/nonhuman setting. Great job and I look forward to reading more.

Was a good story,until i got to the last written chapter and found NO ending,which seems more common than stories with endings.I guess i should start at the last chapter to see if it has an ending before starting at the begnning,and check the date published also,so will know if there is a chance of an ending sooner or later.

Love the Centaur stories! You are so creative and its like the scenes and characters just jump right out at me. Keep up the great work!

I love this series and the Reluctant Mate series as well. Please continue writing. Your imaginative story telling is captivating.

I hope you will be writing more.

First, I can't remember if it was in this series, but I was glad you did the anatomy/sex lesson. Like other readers, I wasn't sure how it was working :) I am glad you didn't let anything happen to Lila, and I am glad Julia loves him. I just pray she doesn't screw things up by freeing that bastard rapist, Paul.

I hope you aren't done with the story.

I agree with the other reader, you are very good at drawing a picture...the world comes to life from your words. And the characters are great. They really draw you in.

Write more SOON!

Wow, is all I have to say. You have a great way of drawing the reader in and getting them hooked. The Centaur series that you have written are just awesome and I am glad I found them. I am sorry that I didn't read them sooner. I love the imagery as well as everything else about these stories. Thank you.

First I LOVE the Centaur stories. I wish there were more...many more. I particularly like that there is good use of imagery in the stories, there are parts that allow the reader to form his or her own picture in the mind while not requiring the reader to work so hard at it that the story becomes unreadable. It is very difficult to find litterature that is both romantic and so blatantly, unapologeticly erotic as these stories are. Few writers understand that a story may be romantic in it's context and still contain love scenes which are raw, passaionate and graphic without losing the sentimate. Well done!

I love the centaur stories and have read them all through a few times but when i came back to read them i am confused as i am sure there was more to the Under centaurian protection series........ Like paul's fate!!! I too would also love some more!!!!!

I just finished reading all these stories for the second time. Please continue! I check every few days and have been checking for a long time. Would love to have another chapter and more centaur stories!

Please keep writing the Centaurian stories, It would be nice to find out about Haley and Rhamnes and why he chose to name the squirrel Gury.