All Comments on 'Under Her Absolute Control'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hooked?

interested to see where you go with this.

APAPover 19 years ago
An interesting start...

But I hope that this won't just be about him being robbed. I'm a big believer in the happily ever after scenario- defined as being "both man and woman are happy at the end." Perhaps she could keep him around as a contented slave?

KiplingKiplingover 19 years ago
Nicely set up, but

theft and/or robbery are not at all part of BDSM play. Hope you are taking this to a higher level of D/s.

Good luck

from

Kipling

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Waiting

come, give up the next chapter already!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Amazing Abi

That is one of the best and scenarios i have read in a long time, and very well written too. In fact this is the first time i have felt the need to comment. Everything about this Abi is intense and arousing. Some sotories this length seem in a rush to tell you everything, but the pace is perfect also. My only complaint is that i want more already! Thank you very much for sharing this story, i hope you do feel moved to continue.

smy3thsmy3thabout 19 years ago
Keep going - it was just getting started

The setup had potential, but you stopped before we could see where you were going to go with it. Don't leave us hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
brilliant

would like to hear more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Wow

Great story and a reminder to be careful out there. Please keep it going. Looking really forward to further installments

subdudeme13subdudeme13about 13 years ago

What a delightful imagination. More More More!

This story must continue!

slave2womanslave2womanabout 13 years ago
no continuance??

Why did you never continue this story, i just read it and it's a great plot for a never ending story, it really reads as a movie and i loved it a lot til now, pity you never wrote a continuances...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
STOP!

No more of this unbelievable tripe.

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