by Wolfblackthorne
I don't often read horror, but this story is written so pictorial that it's easy to imagine the situation, the feelings and the mixture of fear and attraction.
I particularly liked the description of hypnotic effects :)
And... what happened to his wounds...? I have to read chapter 2
very well done i love the detail. paints a very vivd picture in my mind
Shivers... Totally love it, and look forward to reading the other chapters :)
I was asked to look this story over and I have to say it was damn good: well written with a good narrative. The most striking thing was the heavy sense of the eroticism of control that pervades it.
very descriptive, felt like i could completely picture it. Could see the submission happening and the helplessness. Really good read
This was, I have to admit, pretty damn hot and extremely well-written. I enjoyed it.
Somehow I found this story a bit cute. Good job. Happy to see a second chapter.
thanks for the support and favs. this makes writing even more enjoyable knowing some one enjoys it. part 2 is up.. enjoy!
enjoyed reading it very much.. awaiting the next part.. wanna knw what happens next :)
Wow where does he shop, only 8.25 for two packs of beef, noodles and spag sauce!
Thank you for the comments! I am so happy you loved my story. Will be putting out a second chapter soon. Thank you very much for the kind support.
Aksana has topped my sexy vampire / succubus list. Lots more chapters please
I rated five stars because you write enjoyably. I hope to see a continuation... in fact I look forward to it.
Thanks, Jane Marwood
...hard to comment with just this....