All Comments on 'Under The Bridge'

Delicious Story Sir*

i enjoyed this story immensly, it was extremely ummm... satisfying <grins>. i will be gently suggesting a certain someone reads it for inspiration. the way the tension built up between them, and the outdoor setting were great, but the best part was when he held her nose, and then slid down into her throat for the first time .... mmmmm memories... ty again

Another wonderful story, as all yours tend to be, well done Sir

Rainbow_carnage

Very nice Sir Nathan... loved it, buttafly

Excellent...loved it...and loved the way you kept it kind as well as erotic while embracing the spirit of your lifestyle. amanda

A nice tight story, well crafted, very erotic, well up to your usual standard, more please Sir N.

Thanks for sharing a breathlessly wonderful tale! :O

This hit me with an intensity that I wasn't expecting.

that was fucking hot hot HOT!! but why woudl she trust you so quickly? do you just have that aura? I know a man that does, and he called me slut for a year, it made me cum just seeing it or hearing it spoken, damn good story Sir Nathan, very well done

xoxox--M ( a friend)

Will there be a CH. 2 to this GREAT tail?? Loved this one and hope to see another... I cant belivet the edge that it kept Me on... Great tail Man.. hope to see more.. from. M. Sand.

'I am no fool'

hahaha, that you aren't

great piece!

fucking awesome.

you're god...

Coughs...um...Chapter two, anyone? Pretty please? :-)

Now this is the way it should be done, period.

A first rate story. But I need more of the same.

Sir,

You did a wonderful job with this story. I was reading it and got so turned on by it that I had to beg my Sir for his cock down my throat. Thank you!

~hoax

More please Sir!

That was an amazing story....I would love to read chapter 2

I really do love all of your BDSM submissions. Keep them coming, I masturbate to them every night!

mmmm yes please

sir,what a thrilling tale.hopefully she'll be used again,and we'll get all those nasty details as well.thanks.

Very hot, nice tempo, not too rushed.......just perfect.

awesome sir :P

i need a master like him

WOW! WOW! WOW!! Totally amazing - I want to be her on that picnic table! This cunt is sogging wet, the clit so much in need of you ....!!!!

This is a great story I hope you are going to continue with it.

wow! just what i needed to get off!

To the edge and back again. Love it, love it, love it. Please continue writing for us Sir Nathan.

Wow! That is all i have to say about Your work Sir_Nathan :)