by randyslocum
The story was pretty good but you messed up with a few punctuation marks in the first few para...but it's okay! overoll....i really liked it...thanks for the read!!!
Loved it.....interracial sex is the best kind.....especially white male/black female......write some more or we can trade...mine are all true stories.....
I like how you have started the story off - a real life scenario and how while under normal day to day circumstances things may have been quite different - you have allowed the characters to go with the flow so to speak and play out some fantasies. I hope you will continue this story of firsts, interracial and taboos that you opened with!