All Comments on 'Under Your Control Scene 02'

WOW! Very good! Excellent! What else can I say? As I read it, I were right there with you as he poured the red wine over the private areas... I can only imagine and it felt so good! Thanks for a great story! From Sexycaz22

I thank you for sharing your beautiful words with us. Your writing is incredible, painting a beautiful picture for our mind's eye. I wait with anticipation for your next story.

Waiting eagerly for the next instalment...so evocative that I wish it was me tied to that table with my lover supping from me!

A very worthy second chapter, again, descriptive and perfectly executed. Now we see that he is in control, but her sensuality and beauty is what shines. Such lovely imaginative writing just fuels so many thoughts and desires in my mind. I love it gorgeous Lady. xx