All Comments on 'Undisclosed Submission'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A competent and well-written BDSM story

Thank you for sharing it with us. I have given you five stars for this one - and please bring us more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Yes, well written and intense story. Not a slam, but a question. What does the dom gain from this particular exchange? To force the safeword through deliberately inducing terror to overwhelm prior assurances? Is this intended to reinforce that ultimately harm will not come?

MetalopnMetalopnalmost 11 years agoAuthor
In response to Anonymous 05/01/13

I am afraid I cannot answer all of your questions as I feel it would damage the "magic" of the story.

However in response to the question "What does the dom gain from this particular exchange?" I will answer you in the form of a question, what does a Dom have to receive to gain from an experience?

I have often found that one can gain the most gratification from bringing a another to the brink, pushing them to their fullest potential.

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