All Comments on 'Unexpected Date'

I like how personal this story is, and how obvious it is that the dom in the story truly cares about the pleasure of his sub and even more obviously, loves his sub. I like that he thinks about basic things like keeping her well fed and well dressed.

I'd like to see more detail. How does the sub react to the dom's actions? There's a lot of sexy stuff going on here and we don't really get to experience the sub's pleasure in addition to the dom's.

I thought the strongest portion of the story was when the dom gets lost in his thoughts of how sexy his sub is with cum on her face. The double penetration at the end could use a little more content to give it a conclusive feel.

Keep Writing :)