by lexxie_mckenzie
That's a deeper story than it looks on the surface. The sex was beautifully economical and spare in its use of language, but the twist at the end was both surprising and unsatisfying. Who is 'he'? What was 'his' relationship with the protagonists? It leaves us intrigued, aroused, and saddened. Altogether an excellent piece of writing.
Truly enjoyable reading and a first when it comes to the last - the final paragraphs.