All Comments on 'Unplanned Vacation Ch. 02'

So many adventures...coming... so much sensuality... Can't wait to go to that resort... Thanks for sharing

You're welcome :)

I quite liked this story, although I am not sure I got it a 100%. Unless this was supposed to be in the future this technology would seem way out there to anybody today. I expected the main character to question more strongly what was going on. I might have put in something about her remembering seeing a cruder version of this kind of technology before, so the reader can be more accepting towards her outright acceptance of this technology.

Also when she was asked to describe her breasts, I would have expected her to determine it highly inappropriate and question what kind of creepy stuff was going on. There should have been some better formulated excuses in the story for why this info was needed for her to go along with it I feel.

As I said, it was not obvious to me whether the last sentence was telling me that all the "technology" she saw was really only her own hallucinations from the tea or not.