All Comments on 'Untamed Family'

by laffalot

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tenbears43tenbears43almost 11 years ago
Hot story

Can't wait for chapter two.

William smythWilliam smythalmost 11 years ago
I want to meet the parents

They must be a pretty damn interesting pair to have raised a bunch of well behaved, 5 star kids like these siblings.

Let's hear their story--soon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
continue

great read....please keep going

Tarheels_FanTarheels_Fanalmost 11 years ago
Please continue

Chapter 1 was fantastic. Can't wait for chapter 2. And as for the other ideas.....sounds like a great plan. Please continue .

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
continue

looking forward to chapter 2, don't leave it too long.

laffalotlaffalotalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

I'm thrilled with the initial response, and I've just sent chapter 2 in, so I'm expecting it to be available by mid week. I'm working on editing ch.3 and have to put the finishing touches on ch.4.

larry74403larry74403almost 11 years ago
All I can say is great story.

Please keep the chapters coming.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 11 years ago
Fantastic storyline

Very loving and sweet sex between the two sisters and their brother. All that is needed now is to involve mom in their sexual love affair.

Well done.

Thanks for the good read.

SatsuSatsualmost 11 years ago
Mmmmm

Excellent start. No messing, just hot horny sex. Well written too, your time spent editing is totally worth it. Nothing ruins a story like poor editing, so I thank you for that. I also thank you for the two orgasms you gave me with this story ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

This is so hot ... I wish I grew up with this kind of family

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