All Comments on 'Using A Twenty-Seven Year Old Free Card'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 hours ago

When you marry, you are entering into a contract. The part about forsaking all others effectively negates any previous contracts concerning relationships with others. This means the get out of jail free card was null and void the second she said, “I do.”

AnonymousAnonymous10 days ago

Dumb cuck story, hoe should've been kicked to the curb.

AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

What a fool? Or just a very pragmatic man. Frankly, I would have divorced the bitch. Or at the very least gotten a formal post-nuptial, and given an ultimatum to seek treatment of alcoholism or else. Maybe also see a shrink, given she at leas subconsciously acted on the impulse that he 'cheated' before they got married, which was only an excuse to try some interracial strange. Drunken lapses usually begin as sober fantasies, and she clearly used his alleged 'cheating' to justify her fantasy. And she never really demonstrated contrition or made restitution for her infidelity until well after the fact. And the black guy who assaulted him should have been arrested and charged for attempted manslaughter. In the real world, something that serious would have been reported at the hospital and the police gotten involved.

I my book, this husband wasn't the asshole. She was, and she paid no price for it. Paying that price isn't revenge but restitution. Consider it restorative justice for a reconciliation. The way out in this story really, really, really sucked.

AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

I know this author favors reconciliations but this one was off-base. Consider, this wife was an alcoholic and mean drunk, whose actions clearly demonstrated she was not trustworthy. People with such problems generally don't seek to get help and reform without major falls that force them to face up. For this situation, it means being divorced and marginalized. Otherwise, she would not face it. Women can be every bit a mean drunk and abusive alcoholic as men can, and this wife fit that perfectly. And facilitated by her friend too. So why put up with it? A real world alcoholic would not seek treatment without a huge kick in the ass. That mean's divorce. Lord knows, I went through a wife in my late 30s not unlike this: a former college wild-child who got together with old college buddies, party drunk ,and screwed around. So I decamped with our 6 year-old, got a divorce and custody based on documenting her behavior, and remarried to a loving, dependable non-alcoholic woman who had my back. It took the Ex three more years to seek an outside program to address her drunkeness and make peace with my new family. We were still polite, but I always still thought of her as a bitch. This husband was a major FOOL.

Ocker53Ocker53about 1 month ago

Who would ever want this slut of a wife back? Just too stupid to contemplate ⭐️

NallusNallusabout 2 months ago

Dry realistic. Real life mistakes, and but for cracking his head and that rallying everyone, including himself, it might have ended differently. I love the story.

HARDUP1957HARDUP1957about 2 months ago

I know if Vicky was my wife and she continue to bring up something that happens before we where even married as an excuse for her so called mistake in Tampa I don't know if I could have put up with it. Steve had every write to be pissed since she didn't care at that point if she thru away 27 years of his love and dedication just to find out how big he was, and yes black guys do seem to want to bed as many white women as they can for bragin rights and don't care if they are married or not.

trucker1965trucker1965about 2 months ago

Way to convoluted and forced. It's like you had 4 or 5 different stories jumbled into 1. To much inconsitences and things that were out of place.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Disappointing.

BEST ADVICE - skip this mess.

As good as the author was, this should be his biggest embarassment.

servant111servant1114 months ago

utterly convoluted chaotic mess. Impossible to follow the story line because there really isn't one...

2 stars

CamdudeCamdude5 months ago

No reconciliation

Out the door the whore goes

NickTeeNickTee5 months ago

Well the author starts the story stating that the MC is hard assed and not gullible and then proceeds to prive that wrong. Turns him into a simp and a wimp. Uses every rehashed cliche about BBC, the MC drinking away jis troubles. Then he reconciles with the wife after she tells him to fuck off and he catches her dancing with another black man. His kids only like him when he accepts his wife's cuckoldry of hom and so on... It's like the author went out of his way to try paint men as pathetic loosers...

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

It's hard to point any one thing as wrong when its ALL this wrong. The BBC myth; The MC who drinks too much to forget the pain he's in as opposed to taking action. I know it's a story but surely there should be a rational and justified ending and not the crap served here.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Another story by an author who's only too happy to turn the MC into a wimp. The wife didn't only cheat once but continued to cheat after. Who writes this crap

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal19695 months ago

this one felt like a compromise with the head injury.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This author, Ohio, capvigurl, tends to make the MC cuck simp who will eventually forgive the wife because oh his love for wife is so great, seriously they make the wife some sluts and MC a cuck simp who eventually forgive them, a little remorse or if any at all, and the shitty wimp MC cucks.. so don't go complaining about their story, these author's write the MC cuck wimp simp and the wife slutty so if you're into those type of stories you'll like these author's if not fair warning stay away from there works

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

5 pages and I still don’t think he asked or received a reason for “why?” The hall pass was an excuse, as was drinking. She was clearly remorseful to a point, but why did she try to throw away 27 years of marriage? All in all, I can’t see why he would have forgiven her and carried on, I think the author couldn’t find reason either, so threw in the head injury.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

good story. Sometimes it takes a knock on the head to see what's really important in his life.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

BS story since the cheating wife didn’t even use protection and she continued to cheat on her husband all night! A real man would never except that whore back. She stated to herself that she wasn’t that drunk and she wanted the stud! She also said to herself that she decided to use the free pass the next day so in her own mind it wasn’t an excuse for what she knew she did which was cheat!. Also the black gym instructor would have been charge which grievous assault since he placed he hands on Steve first and his attack almost killed Steve!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This gets a 1 for many reasons....1. perpetuation of the BBC myth ( on average no bigger, but the average black dick is less functional due to a higher incidence of diabetes and heart disease. Black dicks are also far more likely to be diseased and are attached to men who tend to have criminal records, poor impulse control, low educational attainment, and low IQ. 2. Sexual illiteracy. Vaginas do not stay stretched out for long after sex, no matter the cock size. Prolonged, hard sex actually makes vaginas tigher because they swell. This error tells us something about the author's sex life. Probably not 1 in 1,000 women could take all of a 10", thick cock. Probably only 1 in 10,000 could take one and enjoy it. 3. The booze trope is tiresome. Are most of the authors here alcoholics? The vast majority of white collar workers don't drink to excess, and certainly not as a substitute for solving problems. 4. The reconciliation is ridiculously forced. The wife deliberately betrayed her husband and was incredibly disrespectful. Her alcohol abuse just added to the reasons for dumping the adulteress. 5. Interesting that the negro who assaulted the husband wasn't charged. As written, it was a clear felony, while the cunt was guilty of simple assault. I guess the author is the typical library racist.

someoneothersomeoneother6 months ago

The MC meets adversity by getting drunk rather than doing something constructive. He deserves whatever harm results from that behavior -- no sympathy at all. In fact, I hope he suffers because he is such a weak-willed wimp.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Her black knight in shining armor who injured the husband should be facing criminal charges for assault and battery. There is no way the husband could accept one man fucking his wife all night long and another man causing him severe bodily injury with neither man facing any consequences for their actions. That would eventually drive him to ruin. The wife is beneath contempt. Her just reward would be to live a looong life inside her own wretched and putrid skin.

HighBrowHighBrow9 months ago

Pure Femdom agitprop. Husband is being unreasonable about HIS WIFE CHEATING AND LYING ABOUT IT! Oh, not to mention non-apologetic and unrepentant and later belligerent about her affair. And, the story is repeated several times.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Gawd awful resolution. Steve should have made clear her cheating in no way equaled what he did with Becky and that he would have a free pass of his own and hang that sword over her head. Some time in the future he’d use it.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Can we get a part 2 please? I have so many unanswered questions lol.

Vicky is a profoundly terrible wife. She got to fuck some dude a billion times (and wasn't going to tell him), Steve had to go trough the agony of that, then his kids had the nerve to say he was being an asshole, then Vicky blames him and leaves, then he got his head bashed in. That's a lot of suffering to heap on a man.

I feel very sorry for the dude, he didn't deserve any of that. Very cool story tho

SaltySurpriseSaltySurprise11 months ago

I'm sorry but no man's ego could handle knowing his wife fucked a black man that was much bigger and better than he was. Knowing every time he fuck/made love who would she be thinking of (I know that is a racial stereo type but that is what lit has become. What was to say that it was a 10inch white man ?

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I would love someone to write a really dark ending to this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Sorry that was a misfire. First the purported moral equivalency (according to Vicki) that happened 29 years ago two years before they were married, not even engaged, after a fight where she was allowing another man liberties on the dance floor triggering the MC to get drunk and them duck Becky, vs her getting turned on on Friday night by big cock Davaid, teasing him to get an erection and estimate his size, then eating and drinking with him on Saturday night, purposefully going with him to his room despite their marriage and while drunk, she was filled with desire. If she had stopped once she got less drunk, maybe could be though as a one time slip. But they fuckef over and over again throughout the night with her having cosmic sex orgasms that she would never feel again and that left enough of an imprint on her that she willfully fucked big cock David all night and into Sunday morning. What stared as drunken lack of inhibition, crossed over into a long, thorough fucking as she cheated repeatedly in one nightnon her husband. There is no moral equivalency. Her offense is immeasurably worse. Even she admits to herself that she pulled thr free pass out of her ass. This should never have reconciled. Why? It isn't that she fucked a well endowed black guy (ignoring the standard literotica trope of the mythical huge cock that has an occurrence of less than one in a million regardless of ethnicity), though the MC does come off a bit racist. No it is her heinous attitude. First she doesn't confess. Then when caught she pulls out the free pass. She refuses to take any rela blame for a while and importantly doesn't apologize. For a.one night stand after 27 years of marriage, her betrayal is pretty maxed for a one time incident. She wasn't as drunk as she first claimed. She lied to soften the blow. She never showed much remorse to her husband until after he almost died. Yes he couldn't get the image out of his head. She never asked for counseling. Because she kept milking the "Becky" angle. She tuned to alcohol. Was a mean drunk. She derded him and berated his manhood and his ego. Lost her job. Again wallowing and self pity and sid not apologize. Never owned up to what she did. The.closest is when she admitted in anger some of details. Said yes he was much bigger, yes it was only time, really didn't admit about not being so.drunk around midnight, despite fucking him till 8 am thr next morning, claimed that he wasn't better jsut "different" (that was bullshit), says would she ever do it again (ok being truthful when says nit in this lifetime), but then when she gets angry, giving him the ultimatum about her leaving, and he yes he says some angry words (why wouldn't he based on her shitty attitude, alcoholism, and.lack of counseling) and tells her if she leaves never to come back, we'll what does she do? She calls his bluff moves out, somehow after getting fired is back at the gym, huh? Then bitter divorce, fighting over money, he drinks too much, confronts her and Sue in the bar when she shows up dancing with another black guy who works at the gym, MC gets in Sue and Vicki's face, says some nasty stuff to both (some of it hits a little close to home, as clear though he still owes her, there is no doubt in his mind she is looking to hook up with another black guy), and then gets into an overrated and almost killed. Sure Vicki is distraught, thinks she got him killed (you think?), needs to be sedated, he survives and has partial amnesia and then the Mir ale.happena as suddenly she gifts him with a lot of makeup sex (though he knows not why) and then the deus ex machina. Suddenly nearly dying but getting his memories back, the fact that she cheated is no big deal and milks it for good sex for a couple of months. So why is this unwarranted RAAC, because even though near death experience and partial amnesia could do a partial reset regarding a one night (in this case major) stand, it doesn't at all cover he shitty post discovery attitude, her false use of the "free pass", her lies, her raging drunk behavior when she belittled him, her ultimatum yo move out and the acrimonious divorce. Seriously when did she really apologize? When before the hospital did she really show remorse? When did she own what she did beyond it happened, and I won't do it again but hey remember Becky! And oh yeah thr comment about how he was the one throwing away the marriage when he asked her to stay and that he loved her which set him off, and then she left and moved out. That conversation outside the house on its own is the marriage killer. She was probably ashamed but could not admit fault (talk about an ego and running to the bottle to drown her sorrows) and baited him as if she didn't want to go through the hassle of rebuilding their marriage. While not making progress, the MC tried to hold on better than her. Forget the free pass crap. That was sophistry and was blown out of proportion and clearly not valid after 27 years of marriage. Nah her shitty attitude, lack of (shown) remorse, her lack of apology, and then tossing crap in fave with attitude and then her conversation when she just decided did to leave and blame him for the death of their marriage is simply irreconcilable. Period. Once he remembers that, there should be no hope. Think of it. She pulled a black cock, big dick version of Linda from February Sucks but not in front if her husband, with the cosmic sex angle, the lack of guilt, and the made up excuse (Marc is famous vs David is hung and remember Becky!). Linda showed more.remorse and had two.little.kids with her husband but did the public display. But here Vicki does many ways much worse with her post discovery behavior. There should be no reconciliation. The amnesia was a way to gaslight the readers about accepting her blatant betrayal of their marriage with a measure of premeditated and her incredible desire to be with a.eell hung young stud, since she came.to their marriage a virgin. I like a good reconciliation as much as the next guy, but Vicki doesn't deserve it. The amnesia gambit wad rhe only the author could come up with getting past a one night stand with terrible overtones and implications, but ignored ghe most grievous problem, which was her post discovery behavior which was appalling. Heck even she knew how she was acting was killing any chance. But she still continued to destroy their marriage brick by brick. Sorry but no. This was a misfire. Only way to land it would be to change her post discovery behavior. Have her turn herself around, get therapy, be more honest, show real remorse, but none if that happened. Well written but unwarranted ending.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I think the real problem was that he had sex with someone else BEFORE they got married, and she was having a hard time living with it. So when she found a younger hung man to have sex with, she let it happen to "balance the books", using her 27 year old "hall pass" be her excuse. I call bullshit, and agree with the husband. If she wanted that "hall pass", she should have used it BEFORE they got married, NOT after. Using after, just opened up the door to cheating, and breaking her marriage vows. Maybe I'm old fashioned, but I don't believe in "hall passes", and it wasn't until I started reading LW stories that I even heard of a "hall pass". But then I've never cheated on my wife, and as far as I know she's never cheated on me either. And we've been married 40+ years.

miket0422miket0422about 1 year ago

Let me see if I have this right. Steve plans to study all weekend. He finishes early and goes out to find his friends and girlfriend. When he finally does he sees Vicky dancing two or three songs in a row with the same guy and he has his hand in her ass. She doesn't do anything to make him move his hand.

Steve breaks it up and gets into a fight with the guy. During the ensuing argument Vicky takes Steve's ring off, throws it at him and tells him to shove it up his ass. Steve gets blackout drunk for the rest of the weekend and when he finally becomes aware of the world again he realizes he slept with another woman?

How was that cheating? Vicky broke up with him after being unrepentant about letting a guy grope and fondle her ass on the dance floor.

Granted, Steve agreed to the free pass after she demanded it as part of the terms for them to get back together. But, why was she owed a free pass in the first place? It's like Ross said on Friends. They were on a break.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

She went to Tampa, wound up fucking a black guy with a large cock, then blamed her husband when he erupted, not allowing the excuse of a factitious hall pass/ free pass. Which happened after he had sex with this girl- BEFORE they got married. No mention if they're engaged at the time or otherwise committed to each other. --- So she's trying to turn this David on, & succeeds, not thinking that married women even joke about that. That leads to her going to his room. She says she was too drunk to remember, but actually did days (weeks?) later. As Steve's still furious with her actions, somewhat ignited by his actions, she packs her bags & leaves. Still married, she's seen with another guy in a bar, along with her friend Sue & another man, I suppose. Story's not too clear to me. She shouldn't have been appearing to move on from Steve, but he shouldn't have called Sue what he did.

--- However, after the severe pounding Steve got, perhaps more than should've been (again, story's not clear. He has his head split open by just stomping on the gym instructor's foot? Makes no sense & had to be more than the story tells. But after he leaves the hospital, all is well between him & his wife, even though he retained his memory? After that weekend, he really allows her to buy some racy VS langerie? She says there won't be a repeat, but can he be sure? I'd say no offhand, but they wound up in bed relatively fast.

--- I'm tempted to say he should've sued the gym instructor, but not enough told in the story. Also dropped: what happened with his work? Anybody pay a hospital visit? Who informed his boss? A starting 3-4 star rating, but with the above, 2 stars. ESPECIALLY from the hospital onward. It seems from this & other stories I've read from this author, he likes making men start out as men just to turn them somewhat wimpish. Bob

NitpicNitpicover 1 year ago
Should

Should have dumped her and sued the gym instructor.No mentio of who paid his hospital bill.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It had the makings of a possible 5 star but dropped to a 2 star with the ending that ruined it. The ending was just dumb.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
Racist?

Who gives a fuck. I would have some friends fuck up the black guy just for fun. Maybe more than once. He deserves it. That is not racism. It’s payback. Death is racism

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Bad. Story he willing fucked around dump the whore. She knew what she was doing taunted him about being stretched out and admitted to pulling the dree pass out of her ass. Bad characters weak male suck character as well

nixroxnixroxover 1 year ago

1 star - stupid idea

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Shit story shit result She cheated and he should have BTB (jaybee186)

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesover 1 year ago

Interesting story, enjoyed reading it. Went down a lot of different avenues. Thanks for your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Racist motherfucker much?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why did he get upset coz he saw his wife who he was leaving with another person. Not logical.

And then followed by a pathetic cliché ending. He goes to hospital. He falls in love with her again. Trite pathetic overused clichés.

She got away with her first BBC. She is still waiting for BBC 2, or is it 3 or 4 or even 25?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hope the husband gets what he really wants, that big black cock rammed up his ass, without getting himself beaten up again. What these silly cucks are willing to do for cock...

xhristianjxhristianjover 1 year ago

Hahahahaha so stupid 🤣🤣🤣🤣 I love how women can justify ANYTHING ANYTIME ANYWHERE

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What Vicky did was absolutely wrong. But Steve was an asshole in the way he handled it. The story wanders and dithers around and then suddenly takes a weird, soap opera-like left turn with the headache and amnesia bit. And even after his head injury, Steve kept playing asshole games. These two deserve each other. Note to author: be more careful about shifting the narrator, it was unclear at several points. In conversation sections, identify the speaker more clearly, too.

other2other1other2other1over 1 year ago

Third time reading this one, the emotions in the middle before his accident were really getting to me. She was a slut plain and simple. She took the guy multiple times and only after the fact thought to use the hall pass. Breaking down into drinking was denial plain and simple.

However....

His accident was a gift to her, if he didn't get a head injury they would not have gotten back together. She was lucky, very very lucky and while I don't think she will ever cheat on him ever again, she owes him a lot more than just an increased sex life!

Of course a very well written story to get the range of emotions running that we're all feeling, well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent piece of writing. Very entertaining. Steve behaved like a complete arsehole - forgive or leave her but don't keep her around just to torment her and then go uber vindictive when she says enough is enough. The amnesia was a tad hard to believe but it made for a nice seque into a saner Steve and inevitable reconciliation.

P.S. Can't believe the anons who wanted revenge on the 'the black bastard' who hit him when he was assaulting a woman and pretty much insulting everyone around - but sadly that's what I've come to expect for the misogynistic, racist neanderthals who think they are 'real men'.

LA

brian_scoobybrian_scoobyalmost 2 years ago

5 stars for the ending. lol

EdgeOfSundownEdgeOfSundownalmost 2 years ago

Masturbating material for the sissy cuckys here. You liked this outcome you obviously take it up the ass...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

They are no more than a pair of alcoholics. I feel sorry for the kids because they are still together. There is no need for further comment.

XYZ

ZippityDoDaDayZippityDoDaDayalmost 2 years ago

Forgot to mention your need to stop with the BBC nonsense - you were down right racist in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

1 star for raac with a slut wife

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

One star what a stupid wife

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Pure crap he screws before they were married in a reaction to her getting felt up 20 some yrs later she fucks someone else do.p the stupid bitch where is your pride

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very familiar theme. Different take on wife wants a free pass. Author did a good job of inciting white males with the old bbc tired story line. Looks like the author painted himself in a corner with the story line and didn't know how to end it so took the easy way out with no resolution. No explanation on if the the bbc whores pussy ever shrunk back or if hubby just felt like he was fucking the Holland tunnel though...

BH54BH54almost 2 years ago

I know lots of guys won't like it but I'm glad they were able to work it out. They obviously belong together. Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

too wimpy - 1*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The husband did not even have enough pride or self respect to kick her out. She kicked herself out.

To expect a reader to accept or get behind a husband like the one portrayed in this tale is expecting too much. But its no surprise as this type of husband is prevalent in many of your stories. Too bad as that fact alone ruins this and other of your tales.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

To hell to you with this black cuck story, When your life gets destroyed by actions like this I want to see YOU in pain and torment. Any real man would have kicked her ass to the curb!!! This is a racist white man hating story. Screw the writer!

Just_WordsJust_Wordsalmost 2 years ago

Read it again and it's still very good. I don't agree with her actions. I understand his, but I don't agree. Still, it demonstrates how it sometimes takes a greater loss to teach us what we really have. It's a very good story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

1* - send her back to the black motherfucker!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

SlirCUCK .... nice to see you no longer are posting any of your "cheating WHORE wife Apologist" CUCK stories or that you are posting at all ASSHOLE! Should you decide to submit any future POS tales maybe it should be on how a limp, dick CUCK husband is sodomized by a BBC while his wife watches .... a biography of YOUR life should be easy for you to write while you wait in your bedroom closet for your "loving wife" to bring home her "next" real man to service!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This story is built on cliches...the bbc myth, the alleged "hall pass", the stretched out cunt (this author has never done any serious fucking or he would know size and stamina result in a tight cunt because it's swollen), the medical emergency catalyzing a RAAC, the hyper masculine black man. The story's racism is compounded by the fact that the negro committed a felony when he sucker punched the MC (and, no, having his foot stepped on by a drunk wouldn't provide a defense for what he did), yet he wasn't charged, nor did it appear that he would even get sued. I guess libtard authors don't think blacks should be held accountable for felonies.

Of course, the ultimately MC becomes the usual weak, needy, unprincipled, cuck of an LW husband character, which is the hoariest cliche of all. IRL, a normal man would have simply divorced the alcoholic slut, but I'm sure the cucks who made it to the end loved the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

some issues. She says she is drunk and it just happened yet she uses the free pass excuse. She says she doesn't remember how it really happened yet she stayed all night and into the next morning. So with no guilt and at least the sex after the first time were all planned and consensual its toast. Especially when she describes the action of how great the guy was and how she was too stretched out for sex with her husband.

Love is there but call it pride or ego once she said SHE was done and moving out why fight and why get back together.

Lastly, press charges against the gym guy that hit him causing his accident.

WargamerWargamerabout 2 years ago

It started pissing me off, but in the end l liked the story and hoped they’d get back together and was glad they did. She was idiot and the more she lied about her drunkenness and the encounter itself the worse it got.

We should’ve heard about what happened to the man who assaulted him

Anyways….4/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

She was not a wife. He should not have gone back. yuck.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Idiot, dumb stupid idiot, she will cheat again... Wife wasn't worth it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago
Payback

He never got revenge on the black asshole who put him in the hospital.

AA82ndAAAA82ndAAabout 2 years ago

Too many holes no pun intended.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Grow a spine, you fuckin' cuck. Sorry I wasted my time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Another spineless 21st century "man".

SunnyU2SunnyU2about 2 years ago

story man, this story is racist as hell

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

No effing way the guy takes a cheating lying slut back … just another humiliating cuck story where the husband has to suck it up, every MAN I KNOW would dump this cheating skank!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

wimp story 1*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Saturday night, detestable but could be worked through. Sunday morning, unforgivable!! Becoming a complete drunk, divorcible

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Apparently a lot of toxic idiocy about what a "real man" is is still out there.

And then these idiots wonder why Men Haters hate men... Sigh.

They also appear to not know that there are some quite successful cultures wherein the woman has multiple spouses.

Oh, measel, fyi, most cliches *are* real, just not as common as media present them...tropes on the other hand, those are forced on the audience. (Although I do share your opinion of the average MAGA fanatic.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

NO MAN worth being called a man would stay with that cheating witch … what an effing cuck story …. -100 HATE IT. Did a man hater write this story

iameaseliameaselabout 2 years ago

Im guessing 99% of your stuff literally sucks as much as this one!

Writers need to remove themselves from any idiocy they hold dear before they write and use stupid worn out cliches and tropes (sorry kids cliches arent cliches because theyre real, even though some of you think that) you might as well post this stuff in SciFi Fantasy because its about as a real a a unicorn or an intelligent MAGA cultist.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

These types of stories bother me. The average erect penis is about five and a quarter inches, black or white. Less than 15% of men have erect penises longer than 7 inches. Most women prefer average, as the large hurt and/or are uncomfortable. I interviewed a porn star a few days ago; she is a large black woman. She does not like BBC and they do not do it for her. All nerve endings in a woman's vaginal area are in the vagina, extending about three inches inside the labia. This myth about bbc should die..... it does damage to the average male, and I suspect, has tempted many women to cheat with a break up of families.

nixroxnixroxover 2 years ago

1 star and quite frankly if any woman did that to me, there would not have been any discussion - especially, if it was 30 years and neither one of us had ever cheated on the other. What would there be left to discuss? I would have packed up everything I owned and moved to the other side of the country - without leaving any way for that woman to ever find me. I would not even bother to divorce her, what a waste of time and money. I would never again trust another woman and marriage is not something I would ever do again. ONCE&DONE end of story.

Sgtok66Sgtok66over 2 years ago

Good writing, I enjoyed the story but I really didn't like any of the characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Had promise, but descended into a typical cucky story, and not a good one

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

YUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

never took u for a fucking wimpy cuckold lover

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Let’s be honest, this would have ended way back when he slept with Becky, if not because of her rightfully leaving a pos, because of her dragging out the fight for 1-2 months and not engaging. Pre-marriage he’s on to new pussy in 2 weeks tops

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You are a cuckold man

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

story was good but why do you feel its ok to present husbands as wimps with no pride and dignity. we do no think with our little heads, nor accept infidelity. nor do we accept a knife in the back from a wife or friend. so unless your a cuck or female get your head out of your ass and rethink what you write about. in real life she would have been out on her ass that same night she came home. that's automatic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I know there are folks out there who enjoy stories about wimpy little cuckolds, but I'm not one of them. The author kept it quiet until the very end that the MC was a wimpy little cuck who would enjoy eating cream-pies from the slut. Since this author doesn't have the integrity to correctly tag his stories, I will avoid any more of his stories. WTF is so hard about simply tagging a cuckold story correctly so those of us who dislike them can avoid them???

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another cuck story.

I can’t believe he just let her cheating drop.

The pre-marriage “cheat” he did wouldn’t hold a candle to her actions.

Burn the slut!

Bill

NitpicNitpicover 2 years ago
Wrong

Wrong ending,he should not have taken her back,plus he should have sued Matt.Who paid his hospital bill?.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Back in college Vicky broke up with him, he did not cheat on her. Bad judgment on his part while drunk, but he did not cheat on her. When Vicky teased the guy on the dance floor she cheated for the first time, that was a sexual contact with a man not her husband. The next night when she followed him into her room she had been drinking but was rational enough to know it was wrong. As the late evening progressed into into morning she was sober enough to have said no to any further sex with him...but she continued to have sex that morning regardless. He should have burned her to the ground and the guy with her, he knew she was a married woman.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Entertaining and quirky tale about two stupid and unsavoury people who deserved each other more than they'd ever dare to admit. I didn't care much for the wife and the husband was truely revolting - but the tongue in cheek humour kept the tale moving along.

LA

swedishreader1swedishreader1almost 3 years ago

Yes, because a man with even the tiniest modicum of pride or self worth would ever consider carrying on any kind of relationship with a sand shark.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What a shitty story, the whore knew exactly what she was doing. Then she tries to blame it on him with something that happened before they were even married, yes, he did wrong, but, THEY WEREN'T MARRIED, she broke the vows and seemed to unrepentant and kept rubbing his face in it. If you write any more stories like this PLEASE keep them to yourself, not sure I'll read any more of your stories anyway, not that one reader will bother you.

Anallicker01Anallicker01almost 3 years ago

Yikes! Your fans are rebid reviewers! Talk about tearing you a new one! I liked the ending. I am sorry he got his ass handed to him, though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Why does it always have to be a horses black cock ffs. she knew exactly what she was doing......I just do not believe her and used alcohol as an excuse

JJ

Dlh143Dlh143almost 3 years ago

Shitty RAAC story about a Wimpy cuck and a cheating black cock whore.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Just aspergillosis excuse for a story about a slimy black cock whore and a pussy of a cuckolded husband

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

So, how will he know she won't do another Tampa sometime? I would be asking myself that question a lot.

Anonymous
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