All Comments on 'Uurf Ch. 05B'

by Beatnic_jazzman

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biercebierceabout 11 years ago
Interesting take on the story

Two tales. Both are good. Will you continue this or eliminate one?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Now you're going to make him master of the pot whore?

I was going to give this story a chance to turn things around, but like the comment on the previous chapter says, this wizard has lost his original values and become corrupt. I don't really wish to read this any further. This may be your intention, and so good luck with your new direction. Perhaps it will attract a different type of audience.

hakdrakkenhakdrakkenabout 11 years ago
Brick wall!

Somehow it wouldn't surprise me if this was the end of the story.

Don't. You. Dare. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
The End?

Are you just gonna leave it like this? What's going on?

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