All Comments on 'Valentine Choice'

by oggbashan

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gatorhermitgatorhermitabout 9 years ago
Almost a flash story. Excellent fit for V-Day...

Very nice. The light finally went on and our hero succumbs to the inevitable! Five stars from this reader.

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionabout 9 years ago
Right timing

Good romantic story that grew slowly, almost reluctantly, in relation to the length of the tale, but got where it should, satisfactorily.

Alaska84Alaska84about 9 years ago

Loved it! Thanks for sharing your story!

burningloveburningloveabout 9 years ago
Readers - Read All of Oggbashan's Stories

I'm NEVER EVER disappointed by Oggbashan's stories, character development and satisfaction of spending quality time on reading a quality story.

Wanted to give you six stars, but system only allows 5! Sorry!

I suggest others read some other stories by Oggbashan and decide yourselves.

avidfaavidfaabout 7 years ago
It is quite a delight, you know

that I am not, in whatever way you might think, British in the least.

Really, I don't mean to insult any nationality or individual, but really, what is left of the orange after all of the juice has been expressed, what is left of a person after all the passion has been purged?

"Otterly, my dear, it seems that perhaps we should have ourselves down to the registrar's and make it official"

"Quite right, Reginald, perhaps 27 years is long enough an engagement for us to finally make this decision without haste."

"Yes, my dear, and since I only have 2 weeks left to live, it might be best to see to it this month, rather than next."

"Yes, well, I do have my luncheons and charities planned out every day, but perhaps I can be late for one, though it is a bit of an inconvenience."

"Yes, sorry to be importunate, but it can't be helped, I suppose."

tazz317tazz317about 7 years ago
A LOT OF ARROWS GET SHOT

some might even hit the right pair. TK U MLJ LV NV

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Can I now change bio? oggbashan was diagnosed as terminally ill and expected to be dead by June 2018. As you can see. I am still here. . As long as I can I will continue writing and posting on Literotica but there will be an end - soon. I don't expect anyone to like ALL of my...