All Comments on 'Valentine's Day Dalliance'

by merf68

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ag2507ag2507about 9 years ago
Wot no di'lect!

This is Yorkshire - even the incomers catch the speech. Also, who says sandwiches or postman these days - sarnies and postie - and Yorkshire Pudding singular please even if there are more than one of them, and where was the dripping? Otherwise a cracking good tale. In spite of the received English writing. lol

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 9 years ago
Gave it

Three stars, even if I didn't understand half of what you were saying the girl/girl sex was worth it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Meh ...

We get it; AGA, Postman, Fags ... You're in the UK. If you want full realism, don't forget the crooked teeth and scraggly untrimmed bushes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Two authers one story

Same story posted on Storiesonline by JenQuail on 5th February 2015.

merf68merf68about 9 years agoAuthor
Re: Two authers one story

Author's response:

Same author, different pen names publishing on different sites.

jott50jott50about 9 years ago

you people need to lighten up on the author. im from the states so i had to do some mental changing of meanings in my head while reading but i thoroughly enjoyed this tale of delightful incest. again i must say LIGHTEN UP PEOPLE!!!

i gave it 5* btw

HankWilliams1956HankWilliams1956about 8 years ago

I do like this story very much. I can see it happoning to some one in their situation, and it made me wish I could do such a thing too.

Sybaris_CaesarSybaris_Caesarabout 6 years ago
Heh

I should never stop random searching Literotica. Otherwise I wouldn't have found this gem.

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