All Comments on 'Valerie Ch. 02'

please write other chapters!! they are some of the best ritings ive read..

Brilliant as usual! Looking forward to many more so keep up the good work!

-Dani

Nicely handled scenes and characters! VERY HOT!! I'll look forward to more of Valerie's growing adventures! BRAVO!!

I think it's great that you had examples of BDSM gone wrong and gave ideas about how to live this lifestyle in a safer way. Well written as usual.

The most accessible and best-written rendition of a legitimate D/s scene I've read on all of the 'Net. You've performed a great service for those of us who enjoy safe, sane and consensual "kink." Thank you! Bravo!

Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Your story is amazing.Actually not only this one but the others as well. Congratulations! Don't ever stop!

I am eagerly awaiting further writings including valerie. She is an extremely complex character and you obviously have done extenstive research into the lifestyle. Please continue to devlope her and other characters.

A very enjoyable description of a new persons exploration of the world. I enjoyed it. xantu

Starts rather abruptly but the character development is good.

as a new sub I am inspired by how I can auction my self for use. I related to the main character from the beginning to the end.

Really liked this part of story, got me wondering about trying this out, especialy part about slave auction.