All Comments on 'Valerie's Wake Up Call'

a well writen act of compleate sexual fulfillment!! how i would love to find ayoung woman to fulfill this act for me!

greguk

what an amazing story!! filled with love and passion. boy has that given me a few ideas! the story sounded like it had a ring of truth? excellent well done

great story. don't normally read these but this was great.

Excellent story with vivid details and believable plot. I would have preferred if it was written in the third person as I find first person narrative a little akward. Personally, I would have loved the story even more if there were a little less metaphore and more graphic words. If one were to truly find themselves in a sexual situation where he or she was being pushed past their sexual boundaries, the shock of the "vulgar" terms would only add to the level of arousal.

Best story yet, the specific and prolonged story gave an atmosphere about it, that i couldnt quite put my finger on, It was great!

Loved reading this story. I have fantasized about doing something very similar to this. Would love to have it happen. The closest I've gotten, though, is to have my lover fart in my mouth. No taste, no smell, just the sound when it happens.