All Comments on 'Vampire'

Good story but it needs to be a little longer and yeah I would love to know some of your fetishes girl!

Needs to be more erotic to get me off. But I do like the idea of blood and biting.. maybe I could show you what it feels to be bitten.

it's mine, of course I loved it... anyway...just wanted to let you all know that while I realize this one is "Weak" there will be more to come... I'm just being really slow and lazy... and feel free to contact me, I don't bite hard unless you ask me too ;-)

I really dig the vampire thing (i'm a female who loves a good bite or two!!) and i was really getting off on the whole scenario until the slasher bit. Couldn't he have bitten, lifted her into an EMPTY coffin and taken her with him into his world of blood, bites and submission??!!

Damn this could have been longer!!!!!!

Still whet my appetite... Mmm you have an impressive style of writing... (does her best impression of Count Drac... "I vant to suck yer bloood..." hehehe)

Wickedly brilliant ;-)

still extremely sexy in the end... the guy actually sounds a bit like my boyfriend..

I'm with the UK commenter. I liked the twist of having the guy be a human sicko, but would've preferred a happier ending...like what if there was a sequel where she turned out to not really be dead, and at first she tries to escape him, but he ends up making her into his partner in sadistic depravity?

dude that was funny as all hell come to find out the girl wont get what she wanted he was just some crazy mofo very good

Not Mr. Niceguy, eh?

Liked it. ;-)

An absolutely stunning piece. Incredibly enticing.