All Comments on 'Vanessa's Dissonance Ch. 05'

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Anonymousalmost 16 years ago

Time to move on

I love this story, but it seems lik you're repeating yourself with ass-to-mouth and eating cum from ass. It's time to introduce slut to asslicking, piss-drinking and more humiliation.

Thank for great story anyway!

Anonymousover 15 years ago

Long wait

This is a great story. But when are you going to get around to showing how she becomes a street whore? Don't take so long between chapters.

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Humiliated

Humiliation is the turnon. Gross pain doesn't have much effect. Keep writing!

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

too long.Not very good

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