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All Comments on 'Vegas Ch. 01'

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Hardtwist55Hardtwist5510 months ago

too much graphic sex an d too little storyline...2*

GlennOGlennO12 months ago

Anytime I read the first segment of a story that motivates me to read the next segment t immediately, I can honestly say that your first segment is "compelling!"

Keep writing!!! And...keep up your excellent work!

BrownCuriousityBrownCuriousityabout 16 years ago
very good so far

Cannot wait to read more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great Story

I am really enjoying this story. It is well written and I don't play poker but the tension really comes across. The sex scenes are well done and highly erotic. Keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Outstanding

Have just read this. Yummy start! Can't wait to read the rest

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