All Comments on 'Venus Butterfly'

I hate bare pussy stories. That's a fad that;s quickly fading. I like my woman to look like an adult.

One of a series of really bad stories. This may be the worst.

Very readable and great sex and anticipation. 5 for sure

Awesome short story.

Nothing more need be said.

The story was definitely hot. But you must be a contortionist because from your description of the positions of you and Lori on the love seat, your hands could not climaxed her unless you criss-crossed your arms between and under her legs.

Now all he has to figure out is how is he going to satisfy his sister in law without getting caught.

It could be a good chapter if he brings his wife in for a threesome.

Thanks for the good story

but sooo right!

Well done. Hot hot hot story!

You're improving. This is much better than "Headache."<P>

Thanks for sharing.

this is one if the better stories I have read lately. great storyy line this gave me such a hard boner so thanks. and keep writing can't wait for the next story.