All Comments on 'Veronica, A Doll Story'

This sucks. Almost every other line was "He" something. Please don't write anymore.

Ummm..Well...What can I say? Your vocabulary is limited and your attention to detail is highly misguided. You should probably go through it again and take some unnecessary details out. Also it would be a good idea to fix your punctuation and spelling.

It sound'd lyk u woz fcukn ur mam

Sounds like one of my fantasies. Since my wife won't let me cum in her mouth, or let me fuck her in the ass, I have thought about getting a blow up doll, so I can fantasize about cumming in a woman's mouth, or deep in her ass.

I fucked a granny Blow up which I had years ago and it was well used. mmmmmmmmmmm