Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Vicky Ch. 01'

by oly12oly56

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 5 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Nice work

Im liking the story. Keep it going and make the chapters longer if ya can.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Good start

As the other review said, the chapters need to be considerable longer if you want people to come back to them when the next chapter is posted.

Looking forward to the rest if it isn't rushed.

Wizarddriver

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Wheres the rest

MAKE IT LONGER AND GET IT POSTED ALREADY

drsaltdrsaltabout 17 years ago
and then what?

I had to give it a bad rating. It was only the "set up". This wasn't a story. As the other poster said, get on with it.

don87654don87654about 17 years ago
A good start.....

Lack of erotic behavior in this story.....Maybe it will get better?

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Vicky Ch. 02 Next Part
Vicky Series Info