All Comments on 'Victoria’s Secret'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nice idea but let down by lack of proof-reading

Two girls having fun in a changing room is always good value but this is let down badly by lack of proof-reading. Suggest author reads it slowly out loud and see how much sense it makes in places.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
No Stars

Unreadable!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Pain in the butt

Hardly believable.

I've visited Victoria's Secret many times and know from experience that it's almost impossble for two girls to go into a changing room together.

Evan if you could their changing rooms and really small and it would be almost impossible to have sex in there with another girl. It's a good fantasy but not very sexy

Any girl knows what I'm talking about.

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