All Comments on 'Video Voyeur Turns Exhibitionist'

by Lord Seregil

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I gave it a 1 because it is the lowest option

Terrible plot

Worse writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Criticism...

...Sometimes it's a load of crap. Don't listen to the other guy. I thoroughly enjoyed this story, it was both realistic but with the forbidden fantasy element we all want. More.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
good

I enjoyed your story. Realistic setting and believable plot with a fun fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great

Great plot, good writing. Looking forward to next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
How can it be a plot when it's a true story??

Foolish people! You cannot mark someone down for a bad plot when it's a true story!

It's sexy and it gave me a hard-on. I am looking forward to the next installment.

25% off for using engorged though. The worst, most overused word on Lit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Oh well, our deepest apologies then! NOT!

We didn't realize it was a true story, or we wouldn't have expected it to have a plot. We'll remember that for next time, if the author says it's a true story, then we'll rank the story a hundred even if it's the most pathetic piece of shit ever posted on Literotica. If you can believe that, then I have some beachfront property in Arizona to sell you, dumbass.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
part 2??

me and my fuck buddy want part 2...we loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Awesome!

Eagerly awaitiung the next part! Thank You for a very enjoyable read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Where's part 2?

My hand is still covered in cum, me an my boyfriend are wet as hell gimme more, Tina

AlexandraAlexandraabout 13 years ago
Thanks

I loved the detailed description of the whole male masturbation thing. Not many men write about it, and certainly none so well as you did!

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