All Comments on 'Violin Lessons'

Your tag sentence makes it sound incesty-probably losing you readers. It is creepy with daddy telling the tale. Otherwise, It was an enjoyable read. Redemption via bdsm.

All right, it was an okay read, but there wasn't really choosing between parents. I understand that it was what Derik was supposed to represent, but that seemed so... Forced. It seemed more like... A bland intermission to the story. Not to mention, it was confusing when it hopped back to the one telling the story... The father. It had its moments, but it feels like it was long winded. Not that that's always a bad thing. It does seem to show. Kind of like you put two non-related stories together, in an attempt to make literotic art... And you ended up making a occasionally interesting jumbled mess. The basics of the story was interesting, but the display left a lot to be hoped for...