All Comments on 'Virgin Love'

Well done. Another terrific effort, excellently paced, good dialogue. Nicely styled from a technical point, and very hot. I do enjoy your writing. You tackle different genres with ease. If I had one critique, it would be that you should have a bit more build up in terms of character development...this story was the best out of all that you've written in that regard.

Again, thank you for taking the time to write.

An avid fan,

Bob (CindysBob)

I loved it! Made me wet and feel all warm inside.

Wonderful story. You should publish more! I cannot wait to read them!

I like this story alot. It's more than just a cheap fuck, and that's important. :) they love each other and that makes it so personal and easy to relate to.

I really liked this story because there was so much love. (:

This was a beautiful love story. Thank you, very clean.

I enjoyed this story! Wonderfully written, gripping plot. I find myself wanting to hear more of their story! Very emotional with the perfect hint of erotic fun mixed within. Keep writing!

This story is very real life and hope Jen and Lisa become married and hope you will write more stories about these two beautiful ladies please Martins. xx

Nah! Generic. Guys are bad - blah, blah, blah. Lets try women. Find other avenues for characters to come out.