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By this point it is becoming unbelievable that she has not asked just what would be so bad about becoming fully infected.

She would obviously not be the first to do so voluntarily.

Weeks together unable to either get satisfaction or get apart from each other and she doesn't say "Why would it be so bad?"

Even sci-fi/fantasy has limits to what is unbelievable.

Tw0Cr0ws - Very good point. Especially because I thought about adding something along those lines as I was editing these chapters. (Honest!) I finally just decided to add it to the next chapter so you'll see it addressed soon.

You are one talented lady! The prose is well written, parts are funny, parts are hot. All of it is good. :)