All Comments on 'Visiting Sis Ch. 03'

I am really enjoying the long drawn out tease that this story is. Both Shannin and Stacey are hot babes and he has to at least have one good session with stacey before they return home, either with or without Shannin. I hope you write some more soon.

Has promise of arriving at some hot sharing sis, girl-girl, and/or threesome action.

But the length of the trip and verbose description of it, have me wondering if its worth staying on board till the destination. (And this is after plenty of skipping and scanning.)

In short: way too many words for far too little plot progression.

Otherwise, a well written story.

Paul in Oklahoma