All Comments on 'Viviane 02'

by Tiresias07

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Nope, no improvement what so ever!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Terrible

Ch 1 wasn't great, but this is just terrible.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Suggestion

I think you might be better as a reader. Erotic writing is not for everyone and your gift might lie in other areas.

Tiresias07Tiresias07over 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Great support, Mrs Grundy.

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