All Comments on 'Vixens - Pastels'

Interesting premise. I like Etta's humor and self-confidence. As always with this writer, the story flows well and she keeps the reader's interest to the end. I look forward to Etta's next adventure.

LLB

I liked this as much as the first one, and hope you continue. It was great that the vernacular was Brooklynese and Etta had just the right attitude, sort of a cautious "what the fuck". Very creative and interesting idea for a fetish too, really off the beaten path. Thanks and looking forward to the next installment!

of Etta. She's a terrific character. She definitely needs to teach Wenda (from The Candidate) the ropes (oohlala). More of both of them please. Flora.

This story vividly illustrates a creative way that one man blended his own desire with a restrictive social/religious code. The result was a true work of art.

Kudos to Etta. As a highly competitive person, I was rooting for her victory.

X

This was an enjoyayable story and the main character is portrayed so well. Thank you, I hope you think of writing more "Vixens" stories.

Just out of curiosity I'd like to see his "collection"…