All Comments on 'Voyeur'

Very hot, loved it, would love you to catch me wanking! :-)

thank you for the story, like It a lot

Such a gloriously naughty short story. Love it!

I thoughrally enjoyed your story Morri.

Being somewhat of a voyeur myself this struck a chord deep within. I wonder if he knew he had an admirer following him into the woods?

That is so close to an actual session I had on my own in the bush one time. Now I am wondering I if did have a spy?

Kiwi

Would have been so hot to watch you pleasure yourself as well!!

I love reading this sort of thing from a female perspective

why this story had to end so abruptly.

I thought this was soooo good!!

I read your post in the forum and came over to see what you had written. I enjoyed it, even though it was over so quickly. Where have I heard that before! You conveyed the excitement of secret watching well. Do write some more.

So evocative of the mingled pleasures of masturbation, seeing and being seen.

A vignette, that's what a tale like this used to be called,

a short single scene, some might want longer but if this is what the author wanted to produce then she has done just that.

A great scene! But only one scene.... I would be interested to see more of your writing. 'Voyeur' gives us some idea of the narrator's character, though not a lot; I'd like to know how you develop other characters. And 'Voyeur' has a very interesting situation, but not a plot, since the situation doesn't develop any. I'd love to know more about how you think and whether you're really as good at putting your thoughts into words as this example suggests.

... throws you into the act of watching, but leaving a lot of room to fantasize ...

Beautiful, evocative use of description - I felt like I was there (also watching secretly). More please!