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by moreblabber

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Erotic, but puzzling...

I enjoyed your story quite a bit, but why the occasional shift from first person to third? Having Maila's thoughts known via third person POV while the rest of the story is from your POV is very jarring.

Still, it was fun and promising.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Excellent: ★★★★★ (4.6 = 92%)!

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