All Comments on 'Waiting'

I really enjoyed reading this. The whole thing was very well written.

That was brilliant... The story grabbed me and took me along for the ride - it let me off at the end with tears in my eyes...

Please keep writing?

Kalinrith

Grabs your interest. could be a real page turner.

I loved it! I thought it was wonderfully well written. It really grabbed your attention. You said that the rest of the story was to be published elsewhere, and I was wondering where that elsewhere was, so I could read it! I'd love it if you could finish it here, but if you choose not to, I want to find out where I can find the rest of it!

That was deep. I liked it. Rock on.

You have a way of telling a story that really grabs the reader's attention and doesn't let go, leaving them wanting more. It's also very creative and well written. Keep up the good work. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work.

Well written and left me wanting to read more. I like that it's a scifi story with telepathy; not your run of the mill story here. I hope it's a series!

I really enjoyed your story. I like the sci-fi aspect and the building tension was great. Well written and a captivating start

Well done. I want to see where this goes.