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She let go of his neck and bit his left nipple hard, then his right. Then their lips met, for the first time in the entire experience, and she held his lower lip between her teeth as she came tightly on his cock, tugging it, and twisting on it. Just as she lost control, his hips pounded up under her and he fucked upward hard, pumping faster, and felt his cum beginning to circulate deep inside himself. He felt the pressure build, he felt the semen swirling, and he pushed upward to plant himself inside her.

She felt the first spurt and tensing of his cock as he came, and pulled the blindfold off his head in a quick swoop. They locked eyes and came together, smiling and fucking together in unison, moaning. His cock pulsing inside her, she slowed her motions and pulled at the cock with her newly tightened core. The waves subsided slowly, and she relaxed.

She put her weight onto him, and turned her head into his cheek.

"Oh my, that was a bit rough there Chris," she said, inspecting his cheek. "Sorry about that, but I had to keep you in line at that moment," she said, chuckling.

They laughed about it together, and chatted about their evening plans and their weekend together. . They fell asleep in each other's arms. Chris never forgot that evening with Livina, even though she continued to surprise him for a long time to come.

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SkinTicklerSkinTicklerabout 2 years ago

This was an intriguing idea, but told awkwardly as already pointed out by the nameless. The thump had limitless possibilities that were left unexplored. Maybe a bondage device? A trunk of toys? I'd be happy to proofread your sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
There Ought To Be A Few Hundred Stories Like This

My deepest fantasy is to tie a man (any man) to a bed (preferably his bed) and blindfold him. He must be either in his boxer underwear or totally naked. I want him gagged. I am in total control. Our adventure must start out on a Friday evening...so I will have the entire weekend for me to enjoy our time together. All of our friends and family will have been told we are going on a hiking trip and don't wish to be disturbed unless an emergency comes up. What I do to this man is my secret. But you are certainly welcome to use your imagination. Do I torture him? Even, perhaps, kill him? Do I emasculate him? Do I castrate him? Do I have a group of his coworkers peg him in his anus? Or do we go the opposite direction and give him an entire weekend of the best sex he has never even dreamed of?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
You need an editor

Or you need to do a better job proof reading. There's an "uncorked bottle of wine" in the bag. Which means the wine is flooding the bag and when he opens it, it's all over the floor. "Put the bag on the porch and we'll forget this whole thing" Next sentence - "If the bag is not on the porch I'll know you decided NOT to accept my instructions". So what happens if he doesn't put the bag on the porch? That was very funny shit. I think Chris realizes she's bat-shit-crazy and never sees or talks to her again. Laughably bad.

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Did you bother to proof read this?

When he puts the bag on the porch they agree NOT to do anything. What a joke. And the wine was previously uncorked. Who takes a chance that something is in the wine? No way he drinks any. And after she slaps him I think he quits playing. She brings her nipple close to his mouth and he ignores it. She tries to mount him - turn away. Poorly written, stupid story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Excellent control

You kept this story in hand with skill and precision. Beautifully managed - and again, marred only by the lack of editing, which creates distraction from all the positive aspects of your imaginative and well-constructed stories.

I loved this piece, and especially from the male partner's viewpoint. Keep writing, please!

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