All Comments on 'Walk in the Night'

I liked the story idea, however, it seemed to me that you rushed it at the end. You had this build up about his ex-girlfriend and his current girlfriend, then his attack and getting it in the ass. It was like you were not sure what story you were writing. You have the potential for a good story if only you take your time and think it through.

it's all there, but it felt rushed. With a little bit of polishing this could be a great tale. Look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.

I love this story but it is a bit rushed. More could have been done but its still great. I had the impression that the exgirlfriend's new boyfriend was the werewolf. Probly not, but would have been an interesting addition.

some real potential. Gay nonhuman [eh? :))] stories here are rare. Develop your characters, don't dwell too much on unneeded details [ex- and current girlfriends and their cup sizes? Not needed], and more detail on the act itself.

it was awesome, is there another story? if there isnt u should make another one or more like it!!

Too rushed, at the end, yea, but I really love gay nonhuman! <3

Good story, one of my favourite shorts I've found on here. But the last paragraphs was too rushed in my opinion, any chance you could change that?

But PLEASE give us a sequel !!

Part two... Pleeeeaaaase!

amazing so good and hot, please a sequel if you can to see the human form of the werewolf,, maybe he can bite Alex both of them werewolves and mated

Great story, would love it if someone would write a squeal.