All Comments on 'Walking in Daylight Ch. 02'

by Danae72

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
PiaraqPiaraqover 14 years ago
more please

please please write more... and soon :)

morningsdawnmorningsdawnover 14 years ago
Keep up the great work!!!

I love the story!!! Very different from what I would usually find on this site. Please continue, I can hardly wait for your next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Write more

I love ur story please please write more and make pen and Ryan hook up make Ryan save him from furthur harm please I love them I hate it that pen keeps getting hurt make Ryan protect him

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Love It!!

Not what I usually like to read but I am hooked. Rooting for Ryan to help Pen and for the two of them to become a couple. No one should have to put up with that kind of abuse. No matter what. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
impatiently waiting for more!

great imagination, story idea (thanks for explaining about day- and night-walkers, the bonding etc. so subtly!) and characters. hope there's a happy and sexy ending to come in many more chapters.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous