All Comments on 'Walking in Daylight Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
impatiently waiting for more!

great imagination, story idea (thanks for explaining about day- and night-walkers, the bonding etc. so subtly!) and characters. hope there's a happy and sexy ending to come in many more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Love It!!

Not what I usually like to read but I am hooked. Rooting for Ryan to help Pen and for the two of them to become a couple. No one should have to put up with that kind of abuse. No matter what. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Write more

I love ur story please please write more and make pen and Ryan hook up make Ryan save him from furthur harm please I love them I hate it that pen keeps getting hurt make Ryan protect him

morningsdawnmorningsdawnover 14 years ago
Keep up the great work!!!

I love the story!!! Very different from what I would usually find on this site. Please continue, I can hardly wait for your next installment.

PiaraqPiaraqover 14 years ago
more please

please please write more... and soon :)

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