All Comments on 'Walt and Rhonda Ch. 02'

by toomuchinmyhead

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dirt043dirt043about 13 years ago
great

Loved it hopefully there will be more of this story . Keep up the good work !!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
JGC....

That story deserved a 7, at least!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
A male slut

He made Rhonda the female version of a cuckold.

Sidney43Sidney43about 13 years ago
Pretty good

I almost didn't read this, but am glad I did. You really make it seem real, the hesitancy of an older man who can't quite figure out why this hot younger woman wants him. Well written and another poster is right, a second chapter could be great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
loyal wife + slutty mistress = every man's dream

Outstanding story. Thank you!!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 13 years ago
Interesting storyline.

She may have cuckolded him by fucking another man, but he didn't take laying down, but to think of it he did do some laying down himself.

I guess that makes them even, so far.

Thanks for the nice read.

fregenfregenabout 13 years ago
He was a goner

Have you noticed in chapter 1 and chapter 2 it is the women who decide they are going to have sex? Once Vanessa set her sights on him it was pretty much a done deal. I did love the uncertainty on his part. Does she really want to have sex with an old guy like me?!?<P>

Nice fantasy. Thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good story, but annoying detail

The text message that Rhonda sent includes "fucked Andy". How come he received a different message?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Mindless garbage !

And nothing but. "1" .

elling50elling50almost 11 years ago

Nice story but there is too much inconcistensy between chapter one and two on details like how she got to the airport.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I wouldn`t mind you clearing your head a little more,that was a fantastic read.I`m fucked if know why these people write such shit comments.They can stop reading when they don`t like it. For mine it was great & I can`t wait to read the rest of the chapters. Thanks

irvlynirvlynover 9 years ago
Life cuts both ways.

There are "moralistic" assholes on both sides of the aisle, so to speak. Every now and then a man or a woman is sexualized by someone "they don't belong to", but it's more the sex than the person. Women thinks that only applies to men but it applies to women also. When my first wife cheated on me, a female friend gave me the best insight ever: It's not WHO it is, it's WHAT it is. Even Freud said that sometimes, a good cigar is just a smoke.

Sometimes, a good fuck isn't also loving, it's just fucking.

Toomuchinmyhead is too good a writer to be diddled with by idiots who really don't get human sexuality. What the hell were they doing on this website anyway?

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