All Comments on 'War of the Pussy Snatchers - Interlude 01'

I think I preferred the Invasion storyline more. The corruption was more progressive and insidious. Wrong, subversive and so that much more erotic. Now, it's 'bang: we get you and you're converted right away'. It lacks the gradual mind manipulation and mindbending of stories of the like of Tabico's, Tribblyelse's, Iago's, etc that wrote on mcstories in the same genre.

I don't dislike the setting per say, although I enjoyed the Invasion phase due to the craftiness and deviousness it engendered. But here, the eroticism is too few and far between. It's basically too much 'plot', huge chunks of it with nothing else, and not enough seduction and step-by-step corruption.

There is so much pleasure in anticipation.

Thank you for such a delicious buildup and such a hot resolution.

I certainly liked the story, but you could develop more on the mind bending and gradual mind transformation. Very good world building though.

Great story. Very sexy. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I would love to see more of Alexis and Marguerite pairing in later chapters. Marguerite would be a great character to follow. And getting Alexis jealous would be even better.